my website

[rachy123]

hey geeks,, i have just managed to set up my own web page before i put it out to all clients ect, could you maybe take a look at it and give me feedback, positive and negative. Bearing in mind i am so rubbish on computers , i honestly dont know how i have done it lol xxxx

 

[rachy123]

sorry site is http://saffiremobilehairandlashs.yolasite.com/

 

[Kamio]

Pros - Pretty good. I love the photo page! Some really good pics on there Colour seems a nice mix and site co-ordination seems pretty good and easy to navigate your way around.

Negatives - Grammar and punctuation errors on your 'about us' page. Your contact page looks a bit squished, try to tidy it up a little bit as it'll give it that professional finish you're after. On your ' 3D lashes' page, you could try changing your 'common questions' section to a 'FAQ' Frequently asked questions section. Again, it adds a more professional approach in my opinion.

As a first attempt it's pretty impressive, though. Very well done to you

kam

 

[pippy]

love the colours and the theme specially your header pic very catching. great for a first attempt wish mine could get to that level hehe....
should look into your service details though. for example what do you mean by (only available with other services) next to the child's cut + i'm not sure what prices are like in your area but i think you can afford to go a bit higher on the reconstructant and curling services etc.. + do you offer other services like perms, scalp treatments etc.

 

[rachy123]

thanks for your replies i do like the colours im not too sure if i need to add more to the "about me".
I do not do perms mobile or scalp treatments, what scalp treatments do you do ??
i am trying to add some music to it then i wil put it out there i do think the name of it is really long though, i would like to change it but cant :Scared: xx

 

[Jonathan c]

Hi our wholesale Hair & Beauty internet business is based in liverpool and we want to get involved in Eyelash extensions supplies, I will gladly swap my internet expertise for help with eyelash business advice!
thanks Jon

 

[Miss Pink23]

The main thing that pope out to me is your grammar and sentence structures.
Lashes is spelt incorrectly a number of times also.
I don't like the idea of adding music-I personally think it detracts from the site and can be quite annoying.

 

[JHall]

The main thing that pope out to me is your grammar and sentence structures.
Lashes is spelt incorrectly a number of times also.
I don't like the idea of adding music-I personally think it detracts from the site and can be quite annoying.

I agree with the music thing, if I come across a website with music I generally leave it as fast as possible, the same goes for websites that have pretty snowflakes or hearts falling all over the page its a big distraction.

 

[Sammi74]

Great looking website, just lashs is spelt lashes, sorry I'm so picky with grammar !

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