Newbie here - opinions needed

[Beauty Nailed]

Hi all have finally plucked up the courage to stop lurking and say hello as you all seem like a fantasticly friendly bunch. I trained with creative a little over a year ago but it all fell to the wayside for one reason or another (long story lol) So have finaly given myself a kick up the you know what and have decided to do nails mobile.I have done a few nails and have had positive feedback SO FAR. I have been looking through the bits on here and have seen seannys posts on web sites something I have been thinking about for a while but am not very computer minded so have decided to go with 1&1 and use there web site creator. Unfortually my other half wiped the few photos I had off a while ago so have no pictures on there yet but am building it up slowley but surley. I wanted to ask you guys if you would'nt mind having a look for me and telling me what you think. Positive and negitive feedback all greatly recieved or how it could be improved. Also please feel free to sign my guest book if you like. I have no links set up yet so if any one is willing or would like to be put on there let me know and I will happly add you. The web address is www.beautynailed.co.uk. Thank you


Laura X

 

[Urban Geek]

Hi Laura,

Had a quick look and your site, although not finished, is looking great - quick, easy to read, not too busy and attractive. Post another thread when you have your gallery sorted. Good luck!

 

[Beauty Nailed]

Hi Chris
Thanks for having a look. I will deffenitly post again once I have pics I think that is the one of the main things it is laking. Thanks again for the feedback it is greatly appreciated.

Laura x

 

[Trinity]

I feel like Teacher today picking up bits in people's websites :lol: (no offence meant to anyone by the way) - a couple of suggestions for you for your main page - feel free to ignore if you wish! :lol:

Hello and welcome to my [new - delete the word new] web site, My name is Laura and I am a Creative trained Nail Technician based in the Northampton and Wellingborough area.

[new paragraph]
I currently offer liquid & Powder (acrylic) Nail Enhancements including tailor-made Permanent French, Glitter [acrylic - remove this word] tips and more. Plus an excellent range of manicures ranging form the basic through to the Luxury Spa Manicure. All in the comfort of your own home.


I offer both a personal and professional service with quality nail enhancements at affordable prices which allows you to relax and treat youself safe in the knowledge that all my products are MMA Free.


Gift vouchers are [also-remove this word] available which is a great idea for birthdays or for a treat for that someone special in your life. Available in £5, £10 & £20.


My opening hours are flexible and include evenings plus both Saturdays and Sundays.


Any questions or queries please do not hesitate to contact me also please take a moment to sign my guest book all comments gratefully received. Thank You.

HTH
Trin
xx

 

[Tilly Ann]

That looks great hun! Well done!!

 

[Beauty Nailed]

Thanks Guys x

Thanks Trin for doing that for me I have gone in and made the changes. Am really greatful, it sometimes takes a fresh look to spot changes that need to be made thanks for the suggestions. As you probably will tell spelling is not my strong point even with a spell checker :lol: . Thanks again