MrsHBeauty
Well-Known Member
I'd like to add testimonials and a contact us form. But I'm sure that wont be easy :-/
Hi Hun, looking good and consistent but spotted a couple things;
1. On your home page you refer to yourself as I ( nothing wrong with that) but on the about the tan page you use we, and the contact 'us' page, I think you should chose one or the other, either refer to yourself as 'we and us' or 'I and me' but it just seems more professional that way I think?
2. Your book online page, you still have Xmas spray tans on offer, so your losing money... And your single eyelashes that take a good couple hours to apply and last longer are the same price as your clusters that are 6 times quicker to apply and don't last as long.... As a customer I would opt for the singles on best money option. So your losing money there too.
So maybe you could offer singles at a saving bringing them to the same cost as the clusters if you want to boost revenue there?
Also why not offer half body tans for 5 pounds cheaper, at the end of the day, who in there right mind would opt to have half a tan or certain parts knowing they are paying the same as a full body? So I can see why you would do that if you only like doing full tans, but your losing custom to the ones that don't want all over, so rather than half it, just drop to £5? Just an idea to think about maybe?
Overall looking good though
My website is De La Femme - Home, I could really do with some feedback and tips, especially about the homepage x x
I LOVE your site! It's easy to use, looks really fun and i really enjoyed looking at the pictures!
1, think i changed it all to 'I'
2, the individual price is £30 as its a deposit price...
I also added a new page for clusters but as I do not have pictures im not sure it looks good...looks a bit bare...
well to be honest there is nothing on your home page?
Use a bigger font, and add a couple pictures to make it look fuller and add your contract number, name, facebook etc I would change the layout i don't think it does you justice
Could you give me criticism on my website please good and bad, not completed yet just want to know I'm heading in correct direction. I've done it all myself yes on a free website & hope to have it running in time for new year.
Www.beautyk.weebly.com
P.s I'm sure there was a whole thread for sites but I can't find it! Sorry xx
I LOVE your site! It's easy to use, looks really fun and i really enjoyed looking at the pictures!
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