My Website!! Opinions and constructive critisism pls!!

[tog]

I love the clear lay-out and the pictures are great. I would love to have pics like that on my website. It's straightforward to navigate around too. But I'm sorry, I really hate the grey background, it looks like carpet and the colour is insipid - maybe you could change that?
Please feel free to pass critical comment on my website too. It's very basic but I only set it up at the weekend.

 

[sknight]

I really like your site and don't think there is anything wrong with a guest book personally. I did however notice these little errors, corrections/suggestions are in brackets:

Gift Voucher Page

Gift vouchers: In denominations of £5, £10 and £20, these are ideal for introducing your friends to the mobile beauty experience and are suitable (suitably) priced to pop in to (into) Birthday and greeting cards.

Treatment Vouchers: Choose a treatment from our range of facial and body therapies with our treatment gift vouchers. A delightful Birthday gift or a perfect treat meant (treatment) for a special friend.

Facial Page

Mini Facial : An introduction to skin care. A light cleanse, tone and exfoliation to leave skin soft and glowing followed by a gentle nourishing facemask (face mask). A replenishing mousturiser (moisturizer) completes the treatment. £20
Facial Deluxe: A light cleanse, tone and exfoliation will prepare the skin for a deep relaxing head, neck and shoulder massage to help loosen any tigh (tight) muscles and ease away any aches and pains. A deep cleansing facemask (face mask) is then used to compliment your skin type. A nourishing mousturiser (moisturizer) will help to conclude this relaxing sensation. £28
Holistic Facial: Begin yourtreatment (your treatment) with a relaxing back and shoulder massage followed by a soothing facial including a face, neck, shoulder and head massage. Whilst enjoying the sensation of a deep cleansing facemask (face mask)drift away, revel in a blissful hand or foot massage to complete this luxurious treatment. £40

Body Treatments page
Some sentences seem to be cut off on the right hand side of the page

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I hope you don't mind me mentioning those things.
I love your images on the site too.
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