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Topaz Nails and Beauty - Home - Beauty Salon in Burton
Any help you can offer is great! People on here are so helpful!
Right OK
I do not know how much free run that Mr site gives you with your meta tags, and before anyone jumps on my back Google takes note of your geo tag but does not ignore it, so if you can add meta tags add this to start
<meta name="geo.region" content="GB" />
<meta name="geo.position" content="52.807792; -1.647135" />
<meta name="ICBM" content="52.807792; -1.647135" />
This Longitude and Latitude pin point you to BOT
You have mentioned "Burton" far to many times, remove this, again Page Title, Address, Geo Target, will sort out where you are, if you have a google places account with a web address then google can confirm you have the Geo Targeting correct so will use it, to a degree, it wont harm you.
Your text is to small and to grey, "Accessibility issues, google fully understands the hex code of colours due to people trying to hide keywords, make it clearer. Black bigger text on white
Yep you are trying to hard with keywords, let it flow naturally.
Laymans terms
Do you like being patronised, well you are patronising google and it doesnt like it.
Like I have mentioned in a few posts google do around 400 checks of your website to the users search query, 200 are for relevancy, you have to remember that it is a computer program and all computer program's can answer at the end of the day is one of two words "Yes" or "No"
So all the 400 checks it does do is Yes or No answers, so googlebot question No 179 "Is the "Keyword/s" mentioned too many times" - "Yes" this site is either spamming or making the website for me the googlebot not the reader, drop that one a few places. If that makes sense
Now for the harsh parts of your site
You blog its not up to date, pointless and will not help, you dont need a blog for a local salon, time consuming pointless exercise
Online Booking, Goes to a login page, clicked straight off it
Links. Again no point
Contact: Got an error message, which is googles not your own 404 page
Share, Have a link to your facebook business page not a share button, have a share button for products, unique content, tutorials, advice, not a website.
Contact number, A mobile number, you have a salon, search the net for 0844 or 0845 numbers diverted to your mobile or land line, if you get the right company then you make money off people calling you on a 0844/0845 looks much more professional than a 07 number
Gallery: Image 1 Shabby Chic feel to the salon if this is the look you like reflect it in the website so customers see a connection.
And my fav, Calls to action you have none on your home page, you need to draw me in as a viewer and spit me out as a customer.
Hope this helps and sorry if I have offended you, it wasn't intended, just hope it gives you some pointers.