Jack Shaw
Well-Known Member
Sorry I am not a fan of any free site builders, you do not have full control on the site.Thanks and you have not offended me at all. Mr site is actually quite flexible, but I am still finding my way around it. I am sure that I can do what you have suggested but it may take me a little while.
No problem and the text colour is so so much better, not too sure on the choice of font though, two different fonts within the fold of you home page, not the best idea, keep it all flowing.Do you mind if I message you when I have made some changes to see what you think?
Newsletter, a little old hat, and providing too much white space.
If you want customers details call out to me to click to another page to recieve an offer and grab their details on the special offer page.
In fact you have too much white space on your home page.
I am only going off gallery Pic 1, and to be honest you are not a million miles away, what I am struggling to see is your brand.Do you think that the style of the website is wrong for the style of the salon?
Sack Mr Site and employ a web designerNot sure what else I could do to make it more in keeping.
For a one off fee of a tenner you can buy an 0845 number and have it divert to a mobile, dont worry you dont get that annoying "we are diverting your call" message, the customer rings the 08 number and your mobile will ring instantly.The phone number I know is a problem, but I currently only work at the salon part time, and have another job so mobile gives me flexibility, but I will look into the points you have suggested.
The text colour is something I have been trying out, have tried various other colours. Thought black might look too harsh and bold but I will give it a go.
Again going back to "Newspaper Article" White Paper, Black Text, if the user struggles to read the text then they wont bother. Only to click on the next Salon in Burton that they can read.
Which brings me on to the next part, I know where your salon is, its in Burton, stop telling me, as a user I am not stupid, google isnt stupid, it is not going to rank your site for people in Bristol, you have mentioned you are in Burton 10 times within the fold. Once if at all, especially like mentioned you have google places and an address on your page/s.
Use your title/description to grab me so I click beyond the SERP's not to tell me you are in a place where I am searching in the first place.